Race You to Breakfast

Story Review

Race You to Breakfast by Vivienne Joseph

This story is about the author named Viviene going on a hot air balloon ride in Australia.The balloon needed hot air to make it go up. It made a deafening noise when the burners were turned on to heat the air the air in the balloon.

When the balloon was up in the air, the pilot had to bring it down because the gas canister was faulty. The balloon landed in a ditch when it came down. It had to be rescued from the ditch,

The characters in this article are Viviene the author, Richard the Pilot and the other passengers. I enjoyed reading this article because I have learnt how a hot air balloon goes up and comes down.

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Mils Muliaina - All Black by Alesana Morris.

The story is about Mils Muliaina - All Black. He loves playing rugby and having fun. Mils Muliaina has to train  a lot of time so that  he gets strong. Mils has been a good player.  When he was three years old he moved to New Zealand from Samoa.

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The First Rugby Ball:  A Smelly Story by Trish Puharich

This article is about the first Rugby Ball. In 1880’s the ball was made of pig’s bladder and it was very hard to blow it up with your mouth. Richard Lindon was the first person to invent the Rugby Ball in a place called England. The size of the ball was different because the pigs were of different sizes.

Today, all the rugby balls are of a standard size because it is made of leather and synthetic materials.

I like this article because it is interesting and it tells us about when and who invented the Rugby Ball.

I learnt a lot about Rugby balls.

My Term Two Holidays

My Term Two Holidays

During the term two holidays, I stayed home and played games in my room. When I was tired of playing, I went to have some cold water in the kitchen.

After that I went  back into my room and played my game again. When it was dinner time I walked to the table and had dinner.

After dinner, I brushed my teeth and put on my pyjamas. Then I went to bed.

When I woke up the next morning, my Nana said that we were going to Sylvia Park. We went by car. I saw lots of people at Sylvia Park. We  looked around  and did some shopping. My Nana bought us some ice cream from Wendy's.  After a few hours at Sylvia Park, we went home.

I really enjoyed my trip to Sylvia Park.

By Nga